Friday

I stood on top of a scene. From the staccato report of clinking glasses, the stool's weary creak, the tiresome whir of overhead fans, a melody emerged bearing more meaning, more importance than the vacuous symbols issued from its players. A composer before noise, an artist before lines, a god-man before death, I claimed meaning where there once was none, and there was meaning irregardless. I stood before and held the present, then slipped, and I was, again, a noise among many.

3 comments:

  1. what!?

    this was wonderful for me! really. the idea is fantastic.

    the only thing i thought was taking out the first "scene" line and thinking of new words instead of "noise" and "lines".

    but, again, i may not be the best person to give feedback about the form/word choice and other such literary matters.

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  2. I read literature to evoke moods, feelings, to change my comportment in the world--this little text did just that. Texts are divorced from their author, give it a day and read it again. So much can happen in a day. Nice work.

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